12-05-2016, 09:47 AM
Hey Shadowmuse,
I found your story to be very well thought-out and written. Good character development and a very strong concept. Your writing skills are top-notch. Now as for content, I wonder about the degree of self-loathing the protagonist exhibits here. Or is 'revenge' supposed to be the strong silent protagonist of the story?
Thoughtful readers might also reference this: http://www.therichest.com/high-life/10-p...their-job/
Kindest regards,
Bone
I found your story to be very well thought-out and written. Good character development and a very strong concept. Your writing skills are top-notch. Now as for content, I wonder about the degree of self-loathing the protagonist exhibits here. Or is 'revenge' supposed to be the strong silent protagonist of the story?
Thoughtful readers might also reference this: http://www.therichest.com/high-life/10-p...their-job/
Kindest regards,
Bone
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