Request For Feedback - Unfinished Story by Mr. Fixit.

[Mr. Fixit]

So, I've been working on a story for awhile now, and I have it about half done, but I want to post it here and get done critiques before I continue. I tried to just copy and paste it but it's currently at 37 pages and my phone just won't do it. I have it saved as a docx file, could I send it to someone on the board and they could post it up here for me?

Edit: 20150905 - Edited the title for clarity. - JS

[JustSomeone]

You might want to share with a dropbox link or something similar? Just an idea.

[Mr. Fixit]

Uhhh, dropbox? What's that?

[Bonecracker]

Uhhh, dropbox? What's that?

PM your email address and I'll invite you to a dropbox folder and then you can join and start your own. Then post the story in your own public folder.

[JustSomeone]

Just email the file to webmaster@bearchive.co

[Mr. Fixit]

File is e mailed, thanks.

[JustSomeone]

I will post very soon. Thanks.

[JustSomeone]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g85f9dxhq6ep2n...l.pdf?dl=0

Here is a share to the story, a pdf file. Please download it, read it, and share your thoughts with Mr. Fixit.

[Mr. Fixit]

Thanks for the help. I don't know why but my phone wouldn't cooperate. Please check it out and let me know what you think. It's my first attempt at writing something like this, , and its a very rough unfinished draft. So any critiques would be appreciated.

[Bonecracker]

Good story, Fixit!! Keep up the good work and write more.