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Request For Feedback - Unfinished Story by Mr. Fixit.
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08-30-2015, 09:12 PM (This post was last modified: 09-05-2015, 03:23 PM by JustSomeone.)
So, I've been working on a story for awhile now, and I have it about half done, but I want to post it here and get done critiques before I continue. I tried to just copy and paste it but it's currently at 37 pages and my phone just won't do it. I have it saved as a docx file, could I send it to someone on the board and they could post it up here for me?

Edit: 20150905 - Edited the title for clarity. - JS
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08-30-2015, 10:08 PM
You might want to share with a dropbox link or something similar? Just an idea.
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08-31-2015, 03:11 PM
Uhhh, dropbox? What's that?
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08-31-2015, 06:13 PM
(08-31-2015, 03:11 PM)Mr. Fixit Wrote: Uhhh, dropbox? What's that?

PM your email address and I'll invite you to a dropbox folder and then you can join and start your own. Then post the story in your own public folder.
Check out my new story! 
[url=http://forum.bearchive.co/thread-270-post-20860.html#pid20860]http://forum.bearchive.co/thread-270-post-20860.html#pid20860[/url] 
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08-31-2015, 09:19 PM
Just email the file to webmaster@bearchive.co
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09-03-2015, 09:22 PM
File is e mailed, thanks.
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09-04-2015, 04:04 PM
I will post very soon. Thanks.
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09-04-2015, 11:55 PM (This post was last modified: 09-05-2015, 03:23 PM by JustSomeone.)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/g85f9dxhq6ep2n...l.pdf?dl=0

Here is a share to the story, a pdf file. Please download it, read it, and share your thoughts with Mr. Fixit.
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09-05-2015, 11:36 AM
Thanks for the help. I don't know why but my phone wouldn't cooperate. Please check it out and let me know what you think. It's my first attempt at writing something like this, , and its a very rough unfinished draft. So any critiques would be appreciated.
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09-06-2015, 10:25 PM
Good story, Fixit!! Keep up the good work and write more.
Check out my new story! 
[url=http://forum.bearchive.co/thread-270-post-20860.html#pid20860]http://forum.bearchive.co/thread-270-post-20860.html#pid20860[/url] 
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