11-19-2017, 08:14 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-19-2017, 08:16 PM by Shadowmuse Blown.)
Chapter 7, Version 1 has been posted on my now, subscription-only, Revenge Blog. I wrote this portion a few years back, and for some reason, forgot that I had written a scene and wrote it again in a different version. So, I decided to post both versions on that blog. The first version was posted last week.
I've just now posted the second version of Chapter 7 on the "Revenge" Blog. The scene is basically the same: Tory waking up that first night after she's been blown to 10,000ccs, and how she first reacts to doing everyday things like sitting up and seeing herself in the mirror. Compare the two versions of chapter 7 and let me know what you like in each.
On my regular blog, I've posted chapter 2 of "Revenge" for those who never got a chance to read it on the Revenge Blog before it went private. My regular blog is still free, but a one-time $26 fee will give you a life-time subscription to my Revenge Blog.
I've just now posted the second version of Chapter 7 on the "Revenge" Blog. The scene is basically the same: Tory waking up that first night after she's been blown to 10,000ccs, and how she first reacts to doing everyday things like sitting up and seeing herself in the mirror. Compare the two versions of chapter 7 and let me know what you like in each.
On my regular blog, I've posted chapter 2 of "Revenge" for those who never got a chance to read it on the Revenge Blog before it went private. My regular blog is still free, but a one-time $26 fee will give you a life-time subscription to my Revenge Blog.
