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Another great chapter! Your imagination is fantastic, and your tie-ins to other classic stories in the narrative breeds in the positive side of familiarity. A few typos to fix... I can' point them out if you like, but overall flawless.
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Thank-you for the kind words!
What are you referring to as "classic stories", though, I wonder?
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(03-19-2017, 02:38 PM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: Thank-you for the kind words!
What are you referring to as "classic stories", though, I wonder?
Welcome to Chastity, for example. And Tara from Chastity.
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Also, The Quad, story from the 90s.
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Not familiar with those references.
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(03-24-2017, 01:44 AM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: Not familiar with those references.
That's ok. Just keep up the good work. You're writing is great!! I can't wait for the next part.
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Thanks so much for the complements, sir!
Part 9 of "ENCOUNTER" has now been posted.
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Great stuff!! I hope you are seeing lots of traffic on you site and things go well with every commercial venture too.
I'd love to see some of this get animated, at least drawing form. Like Tricky Ear Buds or Chastitty
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Eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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"ENCOUNTER", Part 10, has been posted on my blog. Sorry for the long wait!
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That was a great addition to the story and certainly brings the erotica aspect of the story to full steam! I can't wait for part 11 when Noella goes back for yet another upgrade!
How big will she go? Not even the author knows? 
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I have a pretty good idea, but, no, I'm not sure exactly how big she'll go! 
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(05-10-2017, 05:28 PM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: I have a pretty good idea, but, no, I'm not sure exactly how big she'll go!
See??? That's AWESOME!!
Man, you have a knack for this stuff. I hope you find a good illustrator too. Bringing those stories to images would be incredible.
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Don't leave me hanging, brah! I need the next chapter(s)!!
This is an AWESOME story.
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So, glad you're enjoying it. The 11th part has just been posted!
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(06-17-2017, 02:17 AM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: So, glad you're enjoying it. The 11th part has just been posted!
Awesome! I hope others are enjoying it also. And guys, it wouldn't hurt to comment. 
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And we wait... and wait... and wonder... and wonder....
Will Noelle blow up to 30,000 milliliters of saline? Will the good Doctor Mei Concupy outfit her with 2 additional breasts? Will her saline implants be swapped out for PPP and then will she grow to 60,000 CCs in size? Will Gary's cock grow beyond 13"? How will Xiu factor into all of this?
Stay tuned for the answers to these and more questions!!
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Wait no longer.
Part 12 of "ENCOUNTER" has just been posted.
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SHAWEEET~~ !!!
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The final segment of "ENCOUNTER", part 13, has been posted at my blog.
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(09-30-2017, 11:07 PM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: The final segment of "ENCOUNTER", part 13, has been posted at my blog.
Thanks. I read it, but I think it went a bit off the rails with the 1-meter 39" long cock and all the massive belly expansion content.
The overall breast expansion and virility improvements were pretty hot though!
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The first part of Chapter 6 has been posted on my "Revenge" blog.
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Now, the second part of Chapter 6 from my "Revenge" blog has been posted.
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I can see where 'revenge' might possibly go and backfire on Ken.
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Well, by the end of this weekend, my "Revenge" Blog should be subscription only and, hopefully, the next installment of "Revenge" will be posted there. Please see either my regular or Revenge blog for instructions on paying a one-time fee to gain access to the rest of "Revenge". I will, also, post the first few chapters of Revenge that are already available on my regular blog.
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