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"Revenge" - Shadowmuse Blown - 12-04-2016 Hi, I just updated my blog at Showmuse-Blown-Revenge.blogspot.com with a new chapter of "Revenge". Please enjoy and let me know what you think! RE: "Revenge" - Bonecracker - 12-05-2016 Hey Shadowmuse, I found your story to be very well thought-out and written. Good character development and a very strong concept. Your writing skills are top-notch. Now as for content, I wonder about the degree of self-loathing the protagonist exhibits here. Or is 'revenge' supposed to be the strong silent protagonist of the story? Thoughtful readers might also reference this: http://www.therichest.com/high-life/10-performers-who-regret-their-time-in-the-industry-and-10-who-love-their-job/ Kindest regards, Bone |