"Revenge"

[Shadowmuse Blown]

Hi,

I just updated my blog at Showmuse-Blown-Revenge.blogspot.com with a new chapter of "Revenge".  

Please enjoy and let me know what you think!

[Bonecracker]

Hey Shadowmuse,

I found your story to be very well thought-out and written. Good character development and a very strong concept. Your writing skills are top-notch. Now as for content, I wonder about the degree of self-loathing the protagonist exhibits here. Or is 'revenge' supposed to be the strong silent protagonist of the story?

Thoughtful readers might also reference this: http://www.therichest.com/high-life/10-p...their-job/

Kindest regards,

Bone