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11-19-2017, 08:14 PM
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Chapter 7, Version 1 has been posted on my now, subscription-only, Revenge Blog. I wrote this portion a few years back, and for some reason, forgot that I had written a scene and wrote it again in a different version. So, I decided to post both versions on that blog. The first version was posted last week.
I've just now posted the second version of Chapter 7 on the "Revenge" Blog. The scene is basically the same: Tory waking up that first night after she's been blown to 10,000ccs, and how she first reacts to doing everyday things like sitting up and seeing herself in the mirror. Compare the two versions of chapter 7 and let me know what you like in each.
On my regular blog, I've posted chapter 2 of "Revenge" for those who never got a chance to read it on the Revenge Blog before it went private. My regular blog is still free, but a one-time $26 fee will give you a life-time subscription to my Revenge Blog.
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We'll have to wait for a subscriber to write a review.
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11-30-2017, 09:24 PM
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Why? I'm posting the first 6 chapters on my regular blog, which is available to everyone. Everyone can go there themselves and read them as I post them and decide for themselves if they want to read the rest and subscribe. No review needed.
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Chapter 3 of "Revenge" has been reposted on my regular blog, if you're interested in atteding.
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(11-30-2017, 09:24 PM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: Why? I'm posting the first 6 chapters on my regular blog, which is available to everyone. Everyone can go there themselves and read them as I post them and decide for themselves if they want to read the rest and subscribe. No review needed.
Because a non-subscriber cannot review anything past chapter 6, ever, and you've stated only the first 3 chapters are available for public viewing.
I would gladly write a review, but I have already contributed financially to your work, and have to spread the 'play money' around carefully.
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12-06-2017, 10:19 PM
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(12-06-2017, 08:34 AM)Bonecracker Wrote: (11-30-2017, 09:24 PM)Shadowmuse Blown Wrote: Why? I'm posting the first 6 chapters on my regular blog, which is available to everyone. Everyone can go there themselves and read them as I post them and decide for themselves if they want to read the rest and subscribe. No review needed.
Because a non-subscriber cannot review anything past chapter 6, ever, and you've stated only the first 3 chapters are available for public viewing.
I would gladly write a review, but I have already contributed financially to your work, and have to spread the 'play money' around carefully.
Well, there will be three more additional chapters for people to consider (for a total number of six on the free site). That should be enough for anyone to judge if they want to subscribe. Writing a review of what's being written on the subscription site wouldn't be practical as new material is constantly being posted. For a review of the entire story, I would suggest waiting for the novel to be completed, and to read that before writing a review. After all, writing a review of only part of story makes little sense.
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Fair enough! We're just in the business of promoting models AND artists/writers.
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"Revenge", chapter 4, has been posted to my regular, free blog.
Tory is passed a J-cup does NOT want to get any bigger, but Ken just pumps her larger and larger. Stop by and take a look!
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"Revenge", Chapter 7, Part 2 has been posted to my Revenge blog.
It's not a long segment, but I figured it was better to get something posted soon in the new year, and get the ball rolling again, rather than make everyone wait for me to edit a longer segment.
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"Revenge", Chapter 5, has been posted to my regular blog.
Read how Tory expands her way up through the alphabet of cupsizes! ;D
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The third part of Chapter 7 has been posted on my Revenge Blog. Once again, it's not a long post, but, hopefully, I'll be able to make the next post a little longer.
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A short update today for my regular blog: "Revenge", Chapter 6, Part 1 has been posted.
Tory get's pumped larger than an R-cup.
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It's hard to believe that almost two weeks has gone by since my father passed away. Thanks to those of you who sent along your condolences: it's really appreciated.
This week's post of part 1 of Chapter 8 on my "Revenge" Blog, has Tory making her first foray into the world after getting pumped to 10,000ccs. I'm trying to take into account the massive weight she now has to carry around, which would be 44 pounds of saline, altogether. Let me know what you think.
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02-19-2018, 06:12 PM
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"Revenge", Chapter 8, Part 2, has just been posted on my "Revenge" Blog.
Tory's returned from her first trip into the outside world at 10K, and is getting ready to go to dinner. But first, she has to post some pix on her website at her new size.
Wait... is that someone in her chatroom?
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I've also updated my regular blog with one more installment of "Revenge", that's available for anyone to read, where Tory gets pumped once again.
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Chapter 6 part 2 is very very good.
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Thank-you! Glad you enjoyed it!
"Revenge", Chapter 8, Part 3, has been posted on my Revenge Blog.
Tory and Ken, and her newly blown 10K tits, are going to a restaurant.
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I've just posted "Possessions", Chapter 1, 2nd-Half on my regular blog. The first part was posted back in August.
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Well, that's definitely a bit of a wild story. The macabre in it touches on one danger zone, however, leading some to believe there might be some misogyny in there. You should watch out for that. JMHO
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Well, that's definitely a bit of a wild story. The macabre in it touches on one danger zone, however, leading some to believe there might be some misogyny in there. You should watch out for that. JMHO
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Yeah, "Possessions" is much darker than anything else I have written, it's also science fiction, so I can push the bounds of size. If you've read my stories, you know that I have no hatred of women. My goodness, anything but! The male character in "Possessions", however, is criminally uncaring in his desire for his fetish for ever-larger breasts on the women he lusts. The women he has "relationships" with in the story are his possessions. The story is about how these women overcome their situations and rise above him. Along the way, we get some might huge breasts to enjoy. If this type of story is not to the liking of any particular reader, I suggest they not read it.
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Back at my "Revenge" Blog, a Second Draft has been posted of Chapter 8, Part 3, which now includes a scene of Tory getting out of Ken's Bugatti, with her 10,000cc balloons. Thanks to ROM for the suggestion! An additional scene was added to the restaurant scene, where Tory is seen by an 18 year old out for a birthday dinner with his parents.
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Just posted "Possessions", Chapter 2, First Half, on my regular, free blog. This story is a lot darker than my usual fare, and there is a scene where Tara thinks back upon the scene in the last chapter where her breasts are pumped so large that they explode. I like to mention this, because there are a lot of readers who don't care to read breast explosion scenes. In the meantime, Kal is pumping Tara up again: even BIGGER. MUCH BIGGER!
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Thanks for contributing. The boobs that are practically nothing but skin waiting to be expanded is a very curious concept.
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Just posted part 4 of chapter 8 of "Revenge" on my Revenge Blog.
It's time for Tory to finally let Ken explode (after a lot of teasing)
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When Tory makes Ken cum, he is so intensely excited by her enormous chest, that he gushes huge amounts of semen for over a minute. However, some readers have voiced that this is either a turn-off, or uninteresting, at best.
With the aim of finding out what readers want, I've created a poll on my "Revenge" blog where you can vote whether Ken's massive ejaculations are worth reading or not. The poll should be up for about a month.
The first part of chapter 9 of "Revenge" should get posted by Sunday.
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Chapter 9, part 1, has now been posted on my "Revenge" blog.
Meet Monique, Tory's new Girl Friday, who happens to be totally infatuated with Tory's colossal chest.
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